Feedback

Some of feedback I got was to fix some of the blank space left in second page of the article. The main picture in the front page of my article needs to be more of the car and show the front of it so that the reader will have a better look at the concept of the article. Give an outline on the Tittle so that the Magazine title will be easier to read and not blend with the cover because the magazine has a white and black background that makes the tittle blend in so the reader can't see some of it. And add some more pictures if in can on the Table of Content, or more explanations of what the articles will be about.